Music sometimes gives me a quantity of creativeness - you're drinking another glass of wine and you're feeling even worse. Art doesn't work without pain; art also exists for compensating pain - Till Lindemann

Thursday, February 3, 2011

A shorter story

To start this off, I would like to say that it is no tied into the other story that I have posted on here, this one is completely separate from my writings.


I was in some mansion that had Halloween decorations everywhere, that's what they looked like at least. There seemed to be a big party or something going on. There were so many people grouped around in many different places. I went into one of the groups to see what was so interesting. In the middle of the group was a woman, she looked at me and smiled, and then i noticed her teeth, she was a vampire. I walked away from the group just thinking that it was a costume, but then i looked at everyone. They all had the teeth and looked like vampires. I left the entire main area and went into a side hallway. Then the same woman that i had seen earlier grabbed my shoulder from behind and turned me around. What's wrong dearie? Feeling out of place?"

She then told me to grab a glass of hers from behind me, i turned around and noticed a cabinet full of glasses with liquid in them.

"Take any one of them that you find interesting and give it to me"

So i looked, and instantly i spotted a glass at the top. The liquid inside of this one contained specks of some silver objects floating freely in it and never falling to the bottom. I took it and gave it to her.

"Interesting, now drink it"

She handed it back and i stared at it for a moment. I decided to drink it, it had a horrible texture, it was oily and thick and tasted like grease. When i was swallowing it, the silver specks began to cut into my throat, my blood was mixing in with the drink.

Then the woman started to laugh. "When this is done, You must be careful on who you trust."

She dissapered, and i was on the floor in pain. Everything was hurting everywhere. I blacked out.

When i got back up, the entire place that i had been in was now destroyed and falling apart. It looked as if i had been passed out for years. It was winter also, Snow was piling up on the inside from a hole in the roof. I got up with ease and looked around for the door. I had the sudden feeling to touch my face, so i did. I was very cold, i thought that it was just because it was winter, but then in my mouth, my tongue touched my teeth, they were razor sharp. I had no idea what was going on, but i was leaving. I ran through what was left of the mansion and burst out the front door.

Right outside was a man leaning against the front fence. He began to walk towards me, and he was staring at me the whole time in doing so.

He had a trench-coat on and had black sunglasses and a hat. when he got to me, he smiled. "Nice to finally see that you're up and about, we have some business to take care of, come on."

I had no idea what was going on, but obviously he did, so i followed him. He took me all the way back to the back of the mansion. We stopped on the back patio. I noticed then that the mansion was right at the edge of a cliff. I couldn't even see the bottom.

Then the man pointed out into the middle of chasm and told me to look. All the way from the other side, an icy path started to form its way across the Huge gap. "When it gets here, we have trouble"

We sat and waited for a long time. Finally the path connected to our side. The man got up and walked towards one of the doors behind us. He tried to open it, but as soon as he did, it was slammed shut and he flew back. All of the doors inside the mansion could be heard outside. they were all slamming shut.

"Well she's here now, look"

I looked out to the end of the path and saw the woman that had given me that drink step onto the cliffs edge. She saw us and smiled.  End





This story is separate only because it was a dream I had, I added nothing more than what was actually in my dream.  All the details are there, that's how vivid my dreams are.  I post it here just to show you how I get my idea.

52 comments:

  1. I wish I remembered my dreams in details.

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  2. "then i noticed her teeth, she was a vampire" that was where this post took a left turn. Cool ass shit, but wow was that out there.

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  3. That's awesome, I usually have a hard time remembering my dreams.

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  4. nice story. looking forward for more!

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  5. I used to have a lot of vampire dreams when I was younger, crap always scared the hell out of me.

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  6. My dreams are always about one thing, and it isn't Vampires.

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  7. After that kind of dreams I'm mad I woke up and again here I am lieing in my boring bed living my boring life.

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  8. awesome story. the detail is amazing

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  9. this story was pretty long actually considering its the internets!

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  10. tl;dr... Bel Air?

    Good story. I had a few vivid dreams last night, and I'm keeping a journal next to my bed so I can write stuff down before I forget.

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  11. Dreams are great material for stories, aren't they? Try writing stuff down in the third person, you may find it strengthens your prose.

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  12. nice story bro, keep them coming!

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  13. Cool blog post.. good idea too, i always have crazy vivid dreams, i might copy u haa

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  14. that was a really good story very good detail

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  15. Wow. I wish I can have some interesting dreams such as yours.

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  16. Crazy dreams!
    http://elbynerual.blogspot.com

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  17. i cant remember my dreams for shit :/

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  18. Cool story, I try and write down my dreams a lot too

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  19. recently i have been able to recall my dreams but luckily they are not so freaky and weird

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  20. I can remember my dreams for a few hours but they're freaky as hell so I wouldn't want to post them anyway! nice story man

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  21. Damn, i wish i could have dreams so vivid man. Most days i don't even dream..

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  22. That is one intense, trippy dream.

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  23. Creepy story but a good one nevertheless.

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  24. sick. i have a dream journal. some are posted on my random perception blog

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  25. Scary things used to happen to me when I was a child and was lucid dreaming :c

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  26. and what of lucid dreams? do tell...

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  27. I don't remember my dreams. :(

    http://returntoeq.blogspot.com/

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  28. Damn, remember my dream is a pain in the a**

    http://marotinus.blogspot.com/

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  29. A really nice read! Looking forward for more!

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  30. Nice story, and I love that image. Saved it :)

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  31. That's very nice, thanks for sharing. :)

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  32. I like the other stories but the dream is a bit, I don't know, I missed the kicker. It was just to predictable. Seeing vampires and become one yourself.I understand that it was just a dream but I would like to see this developed further in a story.

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  33. i don't remember my dream but your story is nice

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  34. keep these stories coming, they're awesome

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  35. creepy ass house!!! GAHHH the horror!

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  36. Hey, nice post, looking forward to the next ones. :)

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  37. If I ever wake up and remember my dream vividly, I jot it down to go over it later and see if I can use a dream translator or something.

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  38. Wow remembering such vivid details like that is a gift.

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  39. Wish I could remember my dreams like that :(

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  40. I like it when dreams are 'structured'... most of mine are just random gibberish. :oP

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